AWA – Page 181 – Kidd Commander!

AWA – Page 181

by Aria on July 20, 2019 at 10:39 PM

Chapter: A Wretched Analog

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temper temper

During the break I wrote a short bit of 98% canon Ulrich prose, which you can read here if you like.

Sandman366

Sooo did he take it or did it fall….?

Very well hidden knife, I guess.

Also that “thk-thnk” makes me think someone’s stomping on brains. (Eww.)
- Aria
  
  If Ulrich is wearing long sleeves there’s 100% something hidden up there hehe
  
  It’s funny you say that! The original draft for this page had Ulrich stomping on the corpse, he’d punched it the same way Phineas punched the robot double and knocked it to the floor instead of Squishing it. I opted for the less graphic depiction of him stabbing it since I usually try to save legit gore or violence for when it’s the actual focus; Ulrich’s emotional response was the more important thing for this scene.
- Nick J-s
  
  Sooo did he take it or did it fall….?
  
  I too am wondering this :thinking:
  - Aria
    
    (he took it)
    - Carcharadon
      
      Funny enough that went down just about how I was thinking it would – now just have to wait to hear what it said and if it was truth or fiction. Truth is usually more damaging though so I’m already inclined to believe the price was right.
jyck

lol the ¡error! notification on the screen…
- Aria
  
  ERROR 404 SHITHEAD NOT FOUND
- Aria
  
  ERROR 404 SHITHEAD NOT FOUND
- caribouchat
  
  good catch, hadn’t noticed
caribouchat

I’m not sure why there is a dot after “see” in the last panel. Not sure what Ulrich was going to ask, or why. “can you see something” doesn’t quite make sense either, unless he can’t see…
- Aria
  
  The out of place punctuation is just how I write dialogue! It’s definitely Technically Incorrect I just like to play with it to help get the delivery I want, like emphasizing individual cadence or where pauses are.
  
  The question itself is asking whether Phineas can see Agatha’s aura; is she just unconscious or dead, basically.
  - caribouchat
    
    Yes, I know that’s how you work. I just didn’t catch Ulrich was talking about. This particular something. I see now. Thanks for your answer ^^