Whilst it’s very much all good, I’d just like to say that the right hand side of this page is PERFECT and could exist on it’s own as a living breathing entity.
caribouchat
He smiles! He really smiles! Best page ever (but would’nt be a best page without all the other ones :-))
Have to say, I’m really impressed how you transitioned the
emotional cues these last few pages. You took the story to a REAL dark place,
and I had just started to wonder if it would fall irreversibly into solid
angst, but then you brought it smoothly back to something more light-hearted. Well
done bro 😀
Aria
ah jeez, thanks man
l33tninja
you’re probably tired of that background anyway, right?
