Or: “I challenge the laws of nature and reason…EXIST!” XD
Seriously though, it’s nice to get some details on Commanding through use of a cogent metaphor.
Aria
To be perfectly honest I’m astounded at how patient all you guys have been while I’ve put off explaining the mechanics of a central story concept for over 200 pages. I’ve gotten a lot of people who are excited to know more about it but not one person complained about how long it was taking. I really appreciate all of you :U I promise I’ll do my best to make my story worth the time it takes to read it.
You’re doing well so far 🙂
I think everyone’s interested because it’s in the title and it’s clearly an important concept to the story, but it hasn’t come so often that we haven’t had other fun things to distract us (Ulrich’s tricks, bunneh magic etc).
l33tninja
I think you are moving the story along at a fine pace; I haven’t felt like you have strung out any part of it to delay telling the “secret” of commanding. It’s all flowing together and feels perfect.
Aria
that’s great to hear, thanks so much =)
l33tninja
So I’m thinking this is a Gideon voiceover from when he was training Phineas
Sandman366
By the way, if there ever was such a thing as a “Speech-Turned-Badass-Creed”, I think this is it.
Khaeta
hey hello hi I still have crow’s monologue from this page onwards saved to my desktop good words <3
Aria
Thanks so much!!! I saw this in the discord when you mentioned it before and completely forgot to respond, I’m glad you commented too haha