AWA – Page 65 – Kidd Commander!

ur agatha unit glows in the dark so she doesn't get scared

AWA – Page 65

by Aria on March 31, 2018 at 9:29 PM

Chapter: A Wretched Analog

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that’s gay

Departure_Dave

Phineas looks intoxicated, or is that infatuated ;D

(Agatha looks slick with her hair down, wow!)
- Aria
  
  A little of both it seems
  
  Thank you! I honestly wasn’t expecting so many people to respond to her hair, it’s a nice surprise 😀
  - reynard61
    
    She’s actually quite beautiful once you get past the “Robot-bodyguard-that-can-destroy-mechs-several-times-her-size” part…
    - Carcharadon
      
      Hah! Speak for yourself, that part adds to the appeal for me.
      - Aria
        
        (same >_>)
    - Aria
      
      MAN all the agatha love makes me so happy, y’all are too good to me
      - reynard61
        
        She’s an interesting, well written character. I hope we see a lot more of her in the future.
    - WeirdEnby
      
      “once you get past”?? I think that part only makes her cooler
Amaaré

D’aaaaawwwwwwww
Very sweet interactions on this whole page.
- Aria
  
  I’M DYIN
caribouchat

First time someone uses your first name is important time. It is the first time isn’t it?
- Aria
  
  oh man it totally is isn’t it aaaaa
Demon

I bet she is not even aware she smiled. She probably thinks herself incapable of the action. Those are the best smiles.
jyck

dang the colours on this page are gorgeous
- Aria
  
  Thank you! I still have trouble with nighttime colors haha
Gaisa

Interesting and I like it, others have already mentioned Agatha’s hair, and I like how she seems to have opened up, her expressions and her smile on frame eight look much nicer on her than her constant scowl, or forced “smiley” 😀
My only query is the last frame, where it seems Agatha’s talking to them in the ship?
Its already been observed that Agatha has an issue with the star ship, so, is she calling from outside the ship, or is that an “echo” of her words before they parted ways?
- Aria
  
  Thanks!!
  
  Ye that’s supposed to just be like a leftover from the last scene as it changes, she’s not actually there. I probably pull that trick too much but it’s just such a nice way to cap off a scene transition hee
  - Gaisa
    
    Welcome, and while its not necessarily the correct definition, I call them echoes, or carryovers. It works for me 🙂
  - Sorin Braveheart
    
    You could probably give it like a gradient fadeout or something to denote whatever the heck i dont know im no designer or whatever.